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Well,

I don't mean for this to be too disheartening, bit the recurring riff from the beginning is basically ripped straight from Super Mario world's castle theme. Also, the drums seam a bit crazy, punctuating almost every note. Try to take a more reserved approach next time.

Despite all this, i have heard much worse on NG. If you need to riase your spirits a bit, listen to Bop Be Bop. It's.... hilariously bad.

50cal1 responds:

Thanks Ive been putting music on here for a while and the only time people comment is when they have something good to say I have other songs that people blammed without telling me why but anywho this is just incoherent bullshit this song is. I didn't mean for it to be review seriously but thanks

Good!

I really like the bass. The melody isn't nearly as catchy, but still good. Better than a lot of stuff on NG! Deserves a score higher than 2.61, that's for sure.

Afterfall responds:

thanks!

Yeah, not bad!

A bit repetitive, but such is the nature of this sort of song. Then again, what I just submitted is too, so yeah. Try to find a different quote than the Obama one, it just doesn't fit.

buyj3llo responds:

thanks for the review. I know the obama thing is totally out of place. I regretted putting it in. But then when i took it out because it sounded bad I ended up missing it; even though it didn't sound right.

Not bad!

Needs work though. The volumes of certain instruments should be lower. Remeber, as stupid as the general publick of NG may be, subtleties in music is a very good thing.

Sounds like a very good start. I'm quite curious as to what this will turn out to be; it has a lot of potential!

FabDee responds:

Thanks!
It hasn't been properly mixed yet. Since I'm still working on it, I haven't reached the mixing stage! So I agree that certain instruments are too loud or too quiet.
Thanks for the constructive criticism!

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