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Hello! I'm The Bee, and I plan to refine my flash artistry* here, and then update my website, which you will hopefully soon know about. *If you want to call it that. I know I don't.
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12 Reviews | 4 w/ Responses
WILL knock you for using loops. Please. Anyone can put loops together. I am unimpressed. Write something next time.
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"Having heard many of your pieces..."
I think I can safely say you need to lay of the chromatic scales a bit. they seem to sneak into your music. Don't worry, I have this problem too.
Also, this ain't no movement! It's 30 secconds!
Still, despite all that, not bad.
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which is a good thing. I hesitate to say you could have made the melody more interesting, but it is elevator music.
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But not that awesome. Still, gag songs have a place and time, and this fits the bill.
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I don't mean for this to be too disheartening, bit the recurring riff from the beginning is basically ripped straight from Super Mario world's castle theme. Also, the drums seam a bit crazy, punctuating almost every note. Try to take a more reserved approach next time.
Despite all this, i have heard much worse on NG. If you need to riase your spirits a bit, listen to Bop Be Bop. It's.... hilariously bad.
Author's Response:
Thanks Ive been putting music on here for a while and the only time people comment is when they have something good to say I have other songs that people blammed without telling me why but anywho this is just incoherent bullshit this song is. I didn't mean for it to be review seriously but thanks
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I really like the bass. The melody isn't nearly as catchy, but still good. Better than a lot of stuff on NG! Deserves a score higher than 2.61, that's for sure.
Author's Response:
thanks!
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I would give you more stars but I'm certain some of those are built into garage band. Also, the phone at the beginning's a bit too long. By no means bad, however.
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A bit repetitive, but such is the nature of this sort of song. Then again, what I just submitted is too, so yeah. Try to find a different quote than the Obama one, it just doesn't fit.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review. I know the obama thing is totally out of place. I regretted putting it in. But then when i took it out because it sounded bad I ended up missing it; even though it didn't sound right.
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Needs work though. The volumes of certain instruments should be lower. Remeber, as stupid as the general publick of NG may be, subtleties in music is a very good thing.
Sounds like a very good start. I'm quite curious as to what this will turn out to be; it has a lot of potential!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
It hasn't been properly mixed yet. Since I'm still working on it, I haven't reached the mixing stage! So I agree that certain instruments are too loud or too quiet.
Thanks for the constructive criticism!
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And this was no exception. Remember that weasel guy from donkey kong 64? YES YOU DO. This should've been his theme.
I really like the build up; how the music becomes more complex as you go on. It stops somewhat suddenly though. That could just be editing, but still.
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